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  • Dear Editor: You keep telling us the publishing industry’s in massive transition. But the simple truth is I want to be a writer. What are my prospects?—E.P.G.

    Yes, the publishing industry is definitely in massive transition. All kinds of stuff is going on, including a bizarre New Wave of thousands of aspiring fiction writers, each of whom is determined that they, personally, need to be richer than the Queen of England.

    The question you must ask yourself is: Do you want to be a writer because you belong to that (wildly unrealistic) New Wave? Or do you want it because you simply love fiction?

    The thing is the industry as we know it is based on an Honor System established way, way back before fiction writers started styling themselves as the new rock stars. In a nutshell:

    The publisher said, “I will provide, up-front and at my own risk, the financial backing, including the accoutrements of the business like editing, cover design, printing, distribution, marketing, and even a cash loan, in certain cases and under certain circumstances, for the author’s living expenses.”

    The agent said, “I will provide, up-front and on my own time, unlimited free hours reading stuff I can’t possibly sell—far, far more hours than anybody will ever realize—in search of golden nuggets, along with my carefully-nurtured professional contacts and my expertise in negotiation and navigating the industry.”

    The fiction author said, “I will provide, up-front and through my own blood, sweat, and tears, unlimited free hours of my time learning this craft until I’m really good at writing those golden nuggets that are worth all this effort to sell, publish, and, finally, read.”

    And between the three of them, they turned out a valuable product. Not usually at much of a profit. Still, it was stuff they were proud to put their names on.

    However, now some aspiring writers are trying to renege. They’re saying, “You guys keep providing what you promised to provide, but I’m not going to provide the unlimited free hours of my time learning my craft anymore. I’m only going to provide as much as I feel like. I’m going to bounce into your business with a couple of years or even less under my belt, wanting publication with Every Fiber of My Soul, and expect to be rewarded with enormous profits.”

    Understandably, publishers and agents sometimes have a hard time coping with this development, particularly those who have been in this industry for a long time. They do the best they can—the agents and acquisitions editors I know are good-natured, extremely-knowledgeable, and well-spoken professionals who treat their clients with respect and normal human comaraderie—but they don’t always get that treatment in return. And even when aspiring writers are respectful and friendly, far, far too many of them are still failing to bring their part of the bargain to the table.

    And there’s absolutely nothing agents and publishers can do about this, because their Honor System says, “Thou shalt not charge writers for the hours and hours and hours and hours of free time you spend reading their queries and submissions.” It’s actually part of the AAR license.

    They are being snowed under by fiction writers’ new and wildly unrealistic expectations. They are running out of money trying to keep up with this development and, in the process, losing the very people who make their companies run.

    Guess what? Someone else is making a lot of money off innocent people by helping them along with those unrealistic expectations. Snakeoil salespeople.

    These are people who don’t know how to write well, don’t love the craft for the sake of the craft, don’t think you need to be a dedicated writer for life, all you need is enough aggressive determination. These are the people who preach, “You have to want publication with Every Fiber of Your Soul.” Why do you have to want this? I don’t know. You just do. They said so. And they wanted you to believe it with Every Fiber of Their Soul.

    In the 1970s this mentality fueled Amway.

    These are snakeoil sellers. And no matter what credentials they wave in your face—”I did it! I write crap, but I did it! Just don’t ask me why I need to get my hands on your money preaching about it now.”— they are not going to teach you how to be good writers.

    I, too, have been making a living as a writer for as long as I can remember. Big deal. It’s not as great a credential as it looks if it doesn’t come with in-depth, hard-won, teachable knowledge of the craft.

    Fortunately, I don’t think this phase of the industry is going to last long. I think the wheels of saving grace have already begun to turn. And the solution does involve the writer pulling their own weight. If you won’t put in all those years and years it takes to develop a marketable talent for this line of work, you can pay. Not the agent or publisher, who are honor-bound not to take payment from you. And certainly not someone whose only takeaway is, “Want Publication!”

    You can pay someone who has put in the years and years (and years and years) of their own free time learning the craft and is willing to help you leapfrog over your committed hours (and they are waaaaaaay more than you think they should be) to becoming someone really good at writing those golden nuggets that are worth selling, publishing, and reading. Then you can either take your highly-improved chances with agents, or you can pay all the dues you need to pay to enter and win the IBPA awards, where publishers and agents more and more look for the quality that’s missing from their inboxes. You can bring your contribution to the table.

    And this is what’s going to save the industry from the tornado fostered and fanned into an inferno by the unscrupulous folks out there telling innocent newbies, “Determination is all you need.”

    No. Determination is not all you need. Lowering the bar on published quality is not a viable long-term business model, unless you’re into cheap crap made in China with your name stamped all over it. And even then you’re gambling on your readers’ stupidity.

    Love is all you need. Love of the craft, love of the words, love of the imagination and its relationship to language over all other artistic media.

    Not love of publication. That’s what agents and publishers are for.

    Love of fiction.

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13 Responses to “Writing fiction: an editor’s manifesto”

  1. the longing for fame and fortune with no effort does seem endemic, and makes people like me wonder why we’re wasting our time, working hard on improving our work, out of love for words. Then i read a blog post like this, and am reminded – thanks :)

  2. Yes, and amen to all you’ve said. Love of fiction is the only thing that keeps one writing during all the highs and lows. The agents and publishers have to love the publication game to be any good and I applaud them for their skills and efforts.

    A writer just needs to love the calling.

  3. I wish there was more of this going around the blogosphere. People are so desperate for quick fixes and shortcuts. No one wants to hear that you need to actually put in your time to see results. I am as hopeful as the next aspiring writer, but I like to think I’m not so egotistical as to think I can just ignore the fundamentals and have my dreams come true. Sure I’d love to see my name in print, but I want it to be for a project I’m proud of, one I slaved over, one where I learned something in the creation of it. I’m in this for the long haul and I wish more people recognized that a hope and a prayer is not a enough to succeed.

  4. Love and determination plus great craft and care make a good work. Thank you for reminding your readers how critical it is to spend the time they need learning and trying. Agents write on blog after blog how important it is to practice, to get it right. I think you’ve posted a great deal on what it means to be “right,” but it’s good to have this reminder of working, waiting, and crafting.

  5. “Love is all you need. Love of the craft, love of the words, love of the imagination and its relationship to language over all other artistic media. Not love of publication. That’s what agents and publishers are for. Love of fiction.”

    Great motto, Victoria! The Queen would be proud! :)

  6. Ash Oldfield (@AshOldfield) said on

    Excellent post, Victoria! I write for the love of writing itself and am prepared to spend years and years trying to get it right. Many people don’t understand that, telling me my efforts should be spent in getting published, not honing my craft.
    I’m so glad there are still people out there writing for the love of the craft itself.

  7. Victoria Mixon said on

    You guys are all balm to the editorial soul.

    You all here: writing for the love of the craft, for the love of fiction—storytelling, beautiful arrangements of words, the lifelong quest to identify that mysterious thing that happens between something on a page and something unspoken in the reader’s mind—you all for whom fiction is your way of staying sane in a basically insane world—

    You people are whom I write my blogs for.

  8. Awww. If only I had read this post before “Why You’re Not Going to Make it as a Writer.” I now have warm fuzzies. Thank you, thank you. :)

    I have been writing stories for as long as I’ve been able to write, and I’ve been telling stories for longer than that. For the love? Writing is my passion and my spirituality, so yeah, for the love. ^_^

    “you all for whom fiction is your way of staying sane in a basically insane world”
    –Ah, this reminds me of something Ray Bradbury said in his book, Zen in the Art of Writing:

    “You must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you.”

    So true.

  9. Perfect! There are too many people who simply want to publish something — doesn’t matter what — before they die. It’s actually a goal, a bucket-list item, rather than a process they want to learn, love and endure.

  10. Victoria Mixon said on

    Yes. And, you know, they’re welcome to do it, but they’re not going to get any encouragement from me. I’ve loved this craft with all my heart for far too long.

  11. Dennis Sein said on

    And then we read anything from of a dozen pulp fiction writers and we say…..Gee my cat could write a better story…..yet these “established writers” sell millions and that’s the allure to the masses and propels them forward in the pursuit of writing riches. Love of craft is a noble endeavor, but do the pulp fiction writers have a love of craft or a love of dollars…or were they simply first on the scene?

  12. “…do the pulp fiction writers have a love of craft?”

    If these pulp fiction writers are those whose work earn the comment ‘Gee, my cat could write a better story,’ then I’d say they have no love of the craft. They may enjoy writing, get carried away by it but they never bother learning the craft – hence the cat comment.

    They luck into a massive target audience, a good marketing strategy and bam, zeros starting to show up behind a certain number in their bank account.

    The thing is, the majority of fiction readers who, I guarantee are not among fans of their work, will forever smirk or grimace at the mention of such work.

    The question for writers is whether or not we want to produce mediocre books and lots of moolah that come with the ridicule.

  13. Victoria Mixon said on

    Oh, I know it’s frustrating, Dennis & Lee. Boy, is it.

    The mega-selling cheap crap you’re talking about is produced by writers who have been best sellers for decades. DECADES. That means they were already firmly entrenched in the 1980s when the publishing industry began to morph so drastically into what it is today.

    Some of them, like Stephen King, clearly do love the craft. And some of them clearly don’t give a damn. But whether they do or not, those zeros are there because they have been best sellers for so long that their names are brands, and we know now that readers do not buy books, they buy authors.

    What’s even more frustrating is that what was considered ‘pulp fiction’ in the grand old days of pulp is actually well-written, well-plotted, fast-paced stuff with a lot of kick and quality. But it wasn’t written for the sake of using this amazing craft to explore the deeper meanings of life, so it was called pulp.

    There are plenty of people out there right now who would love to produce mediocre (or dreadful) books so long as the ridicule came with lots of moolah. That’s because the quality of what we see everywhere we turn these days—the stuff that’s being sold at Walmart, for god’s sake—is so low and the money dangled in front of it is so high that people who have no concept of writing as a craft at all want to call themselves writers so they can win that lottery.

    As it turns out, even that lottery isn’t happening anymore. Professional writers with published books to their names have been losing their publishers in the past year as the economy continues to reverberate through the industry. Now the mediocre writers who get all the ridicule and moolah are the only ones who are safe because they’re the ones with the biggest brand names.

    It’s a mess. It absolutely is. And all those of us who love this work can do is keep doing the work and try not to get sucked into the hype.

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